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Title: My 2D stage completed. Post by: ADJSonic on April 04, 2010, 07:31:53 AM Here's a pic on ImageShack:
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/315/mystage.jpg. DL: http://www.mediafire.com/?m3nyodjinny this my first hack so comments appreciated. Also don't say horrible say what makes it horrible. I drew this by my self but thanks of all of you that have helped me. Video also wanted. This is over Final or WWR without modules. The file i put up is with the module not included.Just Rename it Final Destanation: STGFINAL.PAC. WWR:STGONLINETRAINING.PAC. Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: matteron on April 04, 2010, 07:45:22 AM ...um was a new thread necessary?
Anyway, it is horrible, I'm sorry, but it is simply awful, it looks like you took no time into it... Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: libertyernie on April 04, 2010, 07:47:13 AM It seems like there could be a little more contrast between the background and foreground. I do like the design.
Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: matteron on April 04, 2010, 07:51:30 AM How can you like the design!?! it looks like he opened paint and used the circle and rectangle tool for everything!
Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: ADJSonic on April 04, 2010, 10:30:33 AM I spent 12:ooam. to 12;00pm working on it.But yes I use Paint.I have been working on a version 2 it's probably going to have a new contrast and more detail and probably a bigger camera will that please you.
And like I said it is my first one. Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: ADJSonic on April 04, 2010, 10:32:50 AM libertyernie would you mind make it transparent again also I'm going to make more platforms and more detail.
Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: Akari_Un on April 04, 2010, 12:22:06 PM lol
Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: JBG on April 04, 2010, 12:55:12 PM I'm sorry, but everyone's right. The art is just horrendous.
Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: ItalianStallion on April 04, 2010, 01:07:39 PM come on, dont be so harsh on the kid.
Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: Oizen on April 04, 2010, 01:15:25 PM Ms paint anyone?
Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: Plasmakirby on April 04, 2010, 01:19:20 PM i admit, the artistry is bad, but the layout of the stage actually looks good. you might even be able to make it using models within brawl. just keep trying at it. you'll get better.
Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: SqLeon on April 04, 2010, 01:27:42 PM It would look better if things weren't so jagged and not straight. You should make each color a bit darker as well.
Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: ADJSonic on April 04, 2010, 04:34:30 PM I would like for someone to make v2 transparent then I'll make the camera alittle bigger.
DL: http://www.mediafire.com/?uwykzymw34u Now does the stage look better? Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: DMN666 on April 04, 2010, 04:57:55 PM Your stage looks sexy,its the first no one has ever done it,creative,funny.The list goes on.
Wanna make a stage for me? Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: janfeae on April 04, 2010, 05:42:49 PM Not bad for a first try. I mean, look at my first try.
http://s970.photobucket.com/albums/ae190/janfeae/?action=view¤t=Needssomework.jpg Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: ADJSonic on April 04, 2010, 06:04:32 PM Thanks you to but would you mind to help me and make v2 transperant.Anyone?
Artwork has improved alittle. Wait viewing your image your stage is much better than mine. Would you mind to make my pics better more clear and better then maybee this will get some attention. Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: ADJSonic on April 04, 2010, 06:19:03 PM DMN666 I'll do it later now I'm putting in more detail to this stage to make it look better.First version was to see if people actually like the idea.
2nd one will emphasize on detail and making camera bigger. Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: ADJSonic on April 05, 2010, 06:34:36 PM PLEASE Gosh I'm waiting if I don't get done with this one then i'll never be able to make another which will be better hopefully.
Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: ADJSonic on April 06, 2010, 06:53:20 PM bump sorry i'm piszzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzz.
Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: songeflemy on April 06, 2010, 07:32:59 PM Awesome, i never thought of making a stage FROM SCRATCH. Good work, It was fun to play on, though artwork could be a change.
Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: FairKnight on April 06, 2010, 08:44:58 PM hm, I like the fact you put work into it, but to be painfully honest the art is very..bad. However I still like the effort put into making it, its not like my first 2 stages (Nighttime Kohona and Icey Haven) were mindbogglingly amazing but I improved throughout, Im sure theres ptential in you :)
Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: ADJSonic on April 07, 2010, 05:25:01 AM thanks but would either of you make V2 transparent so I can finish it up and give the full dl after you make it transperant I'm gonna make the camera a little bigger.
Title: Re: My 2D stage completed. Post by: ADJSonic on April 07, 2010, 03:53:52 PM UH NEVER MIND I'm done with V2 excpect dl at 8.
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