Homura's Theme: The loop starts too quickly, it should be like the ones before (the first one is about 01:35:00 - 1:37:50 in the brstm).
Holly Quintet: Could you stretch out the tone (about 00:29:30 in the brstm) with a fade out, the part after is like "building up" and doesn't really work with fade out.
Sorry if I'm incomprehensible.
You're not giving me a lot of detail.