I agree with most of the criticism that UMOP postet. Other than that, this character's beautiful. I love how you put the animations of Marth into what they are now. He's just like a real magician, Close combat attacks aren't as good as long ranged attacks and Spells. I really like all the effects, too, but, seriously, tone that Fire B Move down a bit... It's damage is a bit too high, since you can start casting it in the air, land, and then immediately use it, and the knockback is too deadly. The size of the explosion makes it's hitbox look a LOT better than it is, so you can easily get confused and miss(Hurts when I look back on the fight against Kyzon Link. I tried to cast B, I missed because I couldn't spot the hitbox, and you know what happens if a magician it too near on a fighter :UMUSTDIE:).
To the Fire B move: Tone down the damage a bit, decrease the Knockback, fix the size of the explosion.
Overall, it is really nice work.
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