I'll still do Maritime Wolf btw, I just had like no time at all in the last week. I'll try to get an ingame version done by next week.
Apples' Falco: I like the white feathers, but I feel the texture as a whole is a bit too pale at the moment. I'd suggest to just make all the red darker and more saturated.
Oh and yeah, I love those new G&Ws.
So, can i upload my Mars Falco to the Vault already?
Just because multiple versions are okay, doesn't mean you should get sloppy. Not saying you are, but being impatient to release a texture is a good way to get there. The textures that took the most work now often are among the best textures in the project, imo. And the number of both minor revisions and total revamps some textures went through is astonishing.
I myself liked your second Falco best. It's also the most distinct towards the other two versions, so I think it'd be the most worthy of a seperate release. Still there were suggestions for minor changes for all of them, which you didn't seem to take notice of - you don't have to revamp the whole texture everything you change something. If you really don't want to put any more effort into it, go ahead and upload what you have, but while it isn't bad, I see potential to make it even better. Putting the efforts of many together to get the best possible results is the core of this project's success and what makes it as fun as it is in my eyes.
Like, maybe try to change the color of the collar to a tone of white similiar to the shirt so it isn't as super colorful and more in line with other Mars textures, think about darkening the feathers (or maybe the west instead) a tad like Zacheart suggested and/or consider other colors for the eye marks like Mithost said. I'd also agree with him to not put a logo on Falco's back as neither Mars Fox nor any other MMM Falcos have it. If nothing works out you can still go back to the old version without having lost much time at all, otherwise your texture just got better.
Also, it'd be nice to see ingame screenshots at one point before it's released and you could just show those youi'd use for the BV previews beforehand.
It's a bit harder to get feedback here than it was on Smashmods, maybe making a thread on Smashboards would have been better in that aspect, but that's no reason to stop giving one's best.