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« Reply #1740 on: September 27, 2011, 07:41:08 PM » |
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Who's he over?
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« Reply #1742 on: September 27, 2011, 08:17:41 PM » |
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Either that big pronged sword or a giant OBJECTION sound suffice as a weapon
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« Reply #1743 on: September 27, 2011, 08:18:32 PM » |
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Either that big pronged sword or a giant OBJECTION sound suffice as a weapon
Can't believe I forgot about the sword and the first that came to mind was that scroll. |
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« Reply #1744 on: September 27, 2011, 08:20:26 PM » |
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I thought that the seven branched sword or the Steel Samuri spear would work (I like the latter).
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« Last Edit: September 27, 2011, 09:11:49 PM by Segtendo »
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« Reply #1745 on: September 27, 2011, 09:10:21 PM » |
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The face needs to be more defined. it's too rounded atm. D=
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« Reply #1746 on: September 28, 2011, 06:39:03 AM » |
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Well...You can see the face because all face was here lol.  I've prefered to put the document to "OBJECTION", it's better to put a 2D "OBJECTION" on the PSA because the sword don't take invisible texture. |
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« Reply #1747 on: September 28, 2011, 07:05:51 AM » |
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Well...You can see the face because all face was here lol. http://i.imgur.com/fPD6m.pngI've prefered to put the document to "OBJECTION", it's better to put a 2D "OBJECTION" on the PSA because the sword don't take invisible texture.
*takes out trusty critiquing markers*
Like Star said, his face is too round and also his hair line seems off. Also, in my opinion the texture needs a lot of work. It need's finer and more subtle detail like an actual suit would look, and parts like buttons, lines on his clothes, and his shoes seem solid colored and don't look clean at all.
Also, imo he isn't wide enough at the torso. At the moment he looks almost the same width as Ike. The collared portion seems to small.... But I'll let the pic explain what I mean.
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« Reply #1748 on: September 28, 2011, 11:24:26 AM » |
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I think a slightly darker blue would work well for his suit.
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« Reply #1750 on: September 28, 2011, 11:44:19 AM » |
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looks good!
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« Reply #1751 on: September 28, 2011, 12:08:57 PM » |
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Thx you! But i forget to update something, here it's better :  |
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« Reply #1752 on: September 28, 2011, 12:12:16 PM » |
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looking really good (see on segtendo´s sign. and this hack)
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I Dont Take Requests & Dont Do Brawl Mods anymore Maybe Sm4sh modz later
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« Reply #1753 on: September 28, 2011, 12:44:11 PM » |
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Thx you! But i forget to update something, here it's better :  |
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« Reply #1754 on: September 28, 2011, 01:04:48 PM » |
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Yes sir he did. Now that is taking constructive criticism successfully, to full use.
Very nice job.
Also, give his shoes a little bit of a shine.
You can do it with the dodge tool, I assume you use Photoshop now.
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