vERtEx GAllER¥ KTH : End of vertex

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What do you want?

Chris Redfield
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Roronoa Zoro
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Ryu
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GIVE ME A CAKE >=O
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Energy Sword
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Dat Melee Stage
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Melee Stuff! Melee Stuff!
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VEGETAAAAAAAAAA
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Dr.Mario
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OK, if you have vote for this one vote for both last ones or it is whom you are the same given step has difficulty for reading my message :srs:
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September 28, 2011, 01:41:08 AM #1740
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September 28, 2011, 01:45:15 AM #1741
Quote from: Sorceress on September 28, 2011, 01:41:08 AM
I think it's Ike. :P
KTH better make a version where he fights using the Fey's scroll as a sword... That'd totally fit the sword size. xD
September 28, 2011, 02:17:41 AM #1742
Either that big pronged sword or a giant OBJECTION sound suffice as a weapon
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September 28, 2011, 02:18:32 AM #1743
Quote from: SJS on September 28, 2011, 02:17:41 AM
Either that big pronged sword or a giant OBJECTION sound suffice as a weapon
Can't believe I forgot about the sword and the first that came to mind was that scroll.:>.>:
September 28, 2011, 02:20:26 AM #1744 Last Edit: September 28, 2011, 03:11:49 AM by Segtendo
I thought that the seven branched sword or the Steel Samuri spear would work (I like the latter).
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September 28, 2011, 03:10:21 AM #1745
The face needs to be more defined.   it's too rounded atm. D= 
September 28, 2011, 12:39:03 PM #1746
Well...You can see the face because all face was here lol.


I've prefered to put the document to "OBJECTION", it's better to put a 2D "OBJECTION" on the PSA because the sword don't take invisible texture.
September 28, 2011, 01:05:51 PM #1747
Quote from: KTH on September 28, 2011, 12:39:03 PM
Well...You can see the face because all face was here lol.

http://i.imgur.com/fPD6m.png
I've prefered to put the document to "OBJECTION", it's better to put a 2D "OBJECTION" on the PSA because the sword don't take invisible texture.


*takes out trusty critiquing markers*

Like Star said, his face is too round and also his hair line seems off. Also, in my opinion the texture needs a lot of work. It need's finer and more subtle detail like an actual suit would look, and parts like buttons, lines on his clothes, and his shoes seem solid colored and don't look clean at all.




Also, imo he isn't wide enough at the torso. At the moment he looks almost the same width as Ike. The collared portion seems to small.... But I'll let the pic explain what I mean.



Just my 50 cents.
September 28, 2011, 05:24:26 PM #1748
I think a slightly darker blue would work well for his suit.
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September 28, 2011, 05:31:43 PM #1749
Ok, better like this? I've worked really hard...


September 28, 2011, 05:44:19 PM #1750
looks good!
September 28, 2011, 06:08:57 PM #1751
Thx you!

But i forget to update something, here it's better :

September 28, 2011, 06:12:16 PM #1752
looking really good (see on segtendo´s sign. and this hack)
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September 28, 2011, 06:44:11 PM #1753
Quote from: KTH on September 28, 2011, 06:08:57 PM
Thx you!

But i forget to update something, here it's better :



Much better bro!  You really took Beyond's feedback into proper consideration ;)
September 28, 2011, 07:04:48 PM #1754
Yes sir he did. Now that is taking constructive criticism successfully, to full use.

Very nice job.

Also, give his shoes a little bit of a shine.

You can do it with the dodge tool, I assume you use Photoshop now.
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