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« Reply #1455 on: April 15, 2014, 11:00:49 AM » |
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I'm curious, what could I do to polish them?  I know the punch/jab isn't my best, but I'd love to know how to improve them.
As for the smash, the arm should show a bit more force into its movement and the leg seems too extend a bit far... But I assume that it was made on purpose so... no need to change it 
Other than that, I like what you did.
"Fluid" movement, as in?
And I can't seem to help the "jaggedness". That seems to happen mainly when making complex stuff that requires me to pose parts on every frame.
I think he means to make your animations less stiff, to add something... Although I'm not an animator, so I can't describe exactly what does he mean... |
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« Reply #1456 on: April 15, 2014, 11:29:50 AM » |
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Um I think the down smash the hair is off like it need move more and kinda recoil forward toward the end of the smash when she's standing back up. Also I think after Miku's stomp attack she should bring her leg back slower than the speed of the attack itself(it could just be the GIF making it look too fast though). So um the first jab if you have her right foot so she goes on her tippy toe kinda like the right foot of the down smash does I think that would look really good. I really like how all your characters animation are looking you always do your best.  |
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« Reply #1457 on: April 15, 2014, 11:36:12 AM » |
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"Fluid" movement, as in? Smooth, natural movement. And I can't seem to help the "jaggedness". That seems to happen mainly when making complex stuff that requires me to pose parts on every frame. Take a look at her leg when she's stomping(?). Then compare it to Waluigi's Assist Trophy stomp. You should also make Miku have some recoil when she does her stomp(?). I think he means to make your animations less stiff, to add something... Although I'm not an animator, so I can't describe exactly what does he mean... You're on the right track. |
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« Reply #1458 on: April 15, 2014, 11:46:40 AM » |
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Smooth, natural movement.
Take a look at her leg when she's stomping(?). Then compare it to Waluigi's Assist Trophy stomp. You should also make Miku have some recoil when she does her stomp(?).
You're on the right track.
You know what I'd really like/need? An animation tutorial, got any? |
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« Reply #1459 on: April 15, 2014, 11:48:46 AM » |
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Oh, ahem... Whenever you need testers, I'm here
You're on the right track.
That helps 
You know what I'd really like/need? An animation tutorial, got any?
That'd help. But isn't there SDoom Animation class already?
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« Reply #1461 on: April 15, 2014, 12:23:43 PM » |
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I like the down smash, reminds of Waluigi's
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« Reply #1462 on: April 18, 2014, 09:46:49 AM » |
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Ahem! K. Rool has a few vacation photos. lol I'm also working on his Down Smash currently as well. |
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« Reply #1463 on: April 18, 2014, 10:11:57 AM » |
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Ahem! K. Rool has a few vacation photos. lol I'm also working on his Down Smash currently as well.
Nice job with them expressions, Tabuu! |
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« Reply #1464 on: April 18, 2014, 10:43:48 AM » |
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this keeps getting bertter and bertter
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« Reply #1465 on: April 18, 2014, 07:32:19 PM » |
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Looks great, just need to recolor the eyelids to match his head. |
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« Reply #1466 on: April 20, 2014, 02:37:33 PM » |
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Hi again. I can't seem to make K. Rool's Final Smash work the way I want to. DK's keeps wanting to run, despite my completely re-coding and re-structuring the Action tabs. I want to get rid of DK's Final Smash. Anyone able to help me do so? Right now, it T-poses, showing DK's FS graphics and playing the SFX, and I still can press A to make waves appear. What the [censored], man? I'm going to keep working on his other moves for now, but I fear I might have to port him, for example, over Pit. You'd like that, perhaps, he'd be BrawlEx compatible. But I'd hate to have to do that, since the DK version is going along so well despite that. D: Oh, well, I'll keep trying, and waiting for advice, and if I can't get it to work, I'll try K. Rool over Pit. That oughta make BrawlEx users happy. That's all for now. |
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« Reply #1467 on: April 20, 2014, 10:32:58 PM » |
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Hi again. I can't seem to make K. Rool's Final Smash work the way I want to. DK's keeps wanting to run, despite my completely re-coding and re-structuring the Action tabs. I want to get rid of DK's Final Smash. Anyone able to help me do so? Right now, it T-poses, showing DK's FS graphics and playing the SFX, and I still can press A to make waves appear. What the [censored], man? I'm going to keep working on his other moves for now, but I fear I might have to port him, for example, over Pit. You'd like that, perhaps, he'd be BrawlEx compatible. But I'd hate to have to do that, since the DK version is going along so well despite that. D: Oh, well, I'll keep trying, and waiting for advice, and if I can't get it to work, I'll try K. Rool over Pit. That oughta make BrawlEx users happy. That's all for now. |
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« Reply #1468 on: April 21, 2014, 03:27:50 AM » |
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You should check the ShadowKong PSA OR the CloudKong PSA... There would be interesting stuff for you... Just saying...
shadow kong is just a renamed fitsonic.pac so that wont help not sure if cloud isnt aswhell |
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« Reply #1469 on: April 21, 2014, 06:41:03 AM » |
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shadow kong is just a renamed fitsonic.pac so that wont help not sure if cloud isnt aswhell
Well, I'm sure Cloud is... However, his FS is stuck 1st part of Ike's FS... So I thought that could interest Tabuu... |
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