Yeah, off of that here is what I came up with what you should do, DemonBoy.
In this pic:
Eyes: I just rotated part of the eyelash to show you that one part of the eyelashes needs to be lifted higher, as in you made the eyelashes too round.
After that just make the eye part shorter in height it is too tall making it look so round.
Also, maybe make the pupil smaller(comparing to the pic)
Necklace: Aside from the eyes, the necklace line could look more like the game if you made it straight down. It kind of looks unnatural bent like that. Her boobs aren't that big to make it bend like that.
Hmm, The eyelashes seem fine the way they are. it's probably then not having transparency that makes them seem rounder.
the necklace i'll fix though
I can't wait for more previews.
Especially Shiki and Cold.
Speaking of Shiki, how much more needs to be done before she's finished?
Not much. just have to update the rigging. I keep getting distracted making more skins for ratchet though
making these are just too fun